Sistine



I pressed fingertips
To her mechanical
Digits, watched
Her eyes light up.

This moment is
Positively
Sistine.

Creator et machina.
If my electric Eve
Could fall from positronic
Grace,
What temptation
Would be her bane?

Alas,
She is mine.

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Raeven
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o.o
i -love- that ending. hurray from =complete= ambiguity ^^ she is mine and will never fall, she is my temptation ah! love it love it love it

and woo for another sound clip! ..that absolutely didn't give any clues to the meaning at all ><

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This somehow reminds me of Final Fantasy X, especially the machine references mixed with holy references.

SeLiNa JaNe (not verified)
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This piece conjures up images of Catholicism, robotic sexual attraction, and power of life! Very nice!

Turned me on!

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Thanks, Selina. Glad you like it.

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Excellent piece! It made me think about my attachment to my laptop. Nice audio clip; it added life.

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for some reason, i can't help but laugh at the added life comment Tongue like breathing life into something, get it?

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Sounds like a promising relationship to me. Thank you for keeping it sexy.

Raeven
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heh, this is one of his tamer ones, actually. try Love Song or Amorphia Wink