Acrosticly Yours



Vacant sentiments
Achieve
Little more than
Ephemeral bliss.
Naked lovers
Tilt
Into
No one’s
Embrace.

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T
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Very zen.

Raeven
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by far the best "anti-love" poem produced this year *tries to forget all the others forced upon her*

Diana
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Ah, acrostics. Often butchered in the attempt to force words where they don't want to fit.

Not badly done, though one word lines still seem awkward to me. Interesting thoughts encased within though.

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